Antigone Cadmus

This sounds very interesting! I've never heard of Hades (also known as Pluto and/or Dis) having children. Proserpina/Persephone was one of the only goddesses without children. Also, you have a ...

I saw in another one of your posts that you don't like grammar reviews. So instead of being nit-picky, I'm going to point out a few little "errors" I noticed. ...

I'm fine with this being a personal experience, as it is your life, not mine. But does it have to be so explicitly... sexual? Girl on girl, guy on guy, ...

Well, you said you didn't want any critique on your grammar. Tell me if you would like some, because I noticed many mistakes grammaticaly. I'll just quickly mention one problem ...

Hey, Evi! Here as requested. First off, I'd like to ask you a question: Have you ever written in present tense before? Present tense always strikes me as being very ...

:oops: So here I finally am... I apologise about the long wait. I've been really busy. Once again, I am very sorry! :oops: My critique is in bold. Poofles also ...

Hey, Hippie Vampire! Try not to feel insulted when you get harsh reviews. Here on Young Writers Society, we only want to improve your writing. It's fine to include large ...

Hey, Carly! This piece has a lot of potential. But you really, really need to work on your grammar. The most glaring mistake I noticed was your dialogue problems. Whenever ...

Hey, OverEasy, my fellow Purp. :wink: As a prologue, this is great. It gets the reader invested into the story and gives us a good taste of your character. his ...

You could read some William Faulkner. He has a lot of great classics: --The Sound and the Fury --As I Lay Dying Or Upton Sinclair: --The Jungle (great book from ...

Ha, everyone else gives you a one word review, and I decide to review your grammar... ^_^ Man:eh, you can’t do dis, I havnt done nothin wrong. Please at least ...

Here I am, as requested! **3 beers = Drunk **He tried to have sex **I’m still too young. **He said I wasn’t sorry – but I am **I love Daniel ...

Hey, Boltage (is that a word?) Man! Right now there are far too many errors to do a line-by-line critique. Instead I'm going to give you some (hopefully) helpful grammar ...

Hello, Saphire! Here as requested! Sorry about the long wait :oops: . Three pages and four words?:D That's fine, ha. I was more referring to people who come to my ...

Hey, Colleen. :oops: Sorry about taking so long to review this. I've been pretty busy lately. Since you've already gotten a lot of nit-picky reviews, I am going to be ...